Special attention and notes in report
No. SA from reports Improved Grammar
1 3 out of 5 samples were found the paint peeled off from surface when tape test. 3 of the 5 samples had(=were found with) the paint peeled off from surface in / during the tape test. 1./ the 5 samples. "the" 特指范围。2./ with/ have sth.done 表示 sth was done.主语不是done 的执行者。
2 According the information from calling Mr. Bryan, only two (2) pcs samples were conducted for the internal check, and power on check were conducted as follow way: thirty (30) minutes on and then five (5) minutes off as a cycle, then up to four hours on (total 8 cycles), and the result was satisfactory. According to Mr. Bryan, only two (2) pcs of the samples needed the internal check. Power on check was conducted as follows: As a cycle, keep the unit on for thirty (30) minutes and then off for five (5) minutes. Totally 8 cycles were conducted. The results were satisfactory. |
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