大家看看我是否翻译错误

oahemr

(1) 领子的宽度应该是2.5cm =the width of collar should be 2.5cm
(2) 门襟拉链的颜色错误, 应该为黑色= color of the front fly zipper is wrong is should be black
(3) 腰头颜色与大身颜色不同= color of waistband and pants is different
(4) 门襟下脚不平齐，有长短 = the placket of bottom is not level and uneven length

请大家多提意见 谢

feazhp

(1) 领子的宽度应该是2.5cm =the width of collar should be 2.5cm
(2) 门襟拉链的颜色错误, 应该为黑色= color of the front fly zipper is wrong is should be black （建议：the color of front zipper is wrong, it should be black)
(3) 腰头颜色与大身颜色不同= color of waistband and pants is different （建议：the waistband color is different than body)
(4) 门襟下脚不平齐，有长短 = the placket of bottom is not level and uneven length （建议：the placket length is uneven, hem not level)

04211

(1) 领子的宽度应该是2.5cm =the width of collar should be 2.5cm
(2) 门襟拉链的颜色错误, 应该为黑色= color of the front fly zipper is wrong is should be black (color of front zipper wrong, should be black)
(3) 腰头颜色与大身颜色不同= color of waistband and pants is different ( waistband color is different with body color)
(4) 门襟下脚不平齐，有长短 = the placket of bottom is not level and uneven length (uneven placket length)

如果是批语，偶会这样表达

oahemr

谢谢楼上的师兄， 真的学习啦！